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awesome song.

Glad to see you made the top 5 :D

This shit is great, you've really come such a long way.

I know you've spent a lot of time on this and put in a lot of hard work so I would have demanded you make top 5....oh wait lol.

Regardless, I really like this track. Kinda creepy how all the recordings are about people dying lol.

keep it up, you still owe me that collab :P

-TC-

MrFijiWiji responds:

i do owe u one haha. well get on that soon :P and lolololol yes its about god and dying, haha.

Nice

This is me responding to your PM on youtube :P Already listened to your track in full, listening again as I write this...

This has a very unique sounding introduction, the melody is simple yet very solid. good work.

0:00 - 0:25

Best part of the song imo. You nailed this one pretty well. however I think it could use a bit more reverb, and possibly some more ambiance. The bells really give this song character, actually I think that the reason I like this part the best is because it reminds me of my own genre. nicely done.

0:25 when the drums hit came as a bit of a surprise you've got rhythm down pretty well, though the melody loses its focus. I think you ought to expand on it and build harmonies and melodic structure ;)

also, the percussion is pretty well done though I think it would be nice if you put some filters on it to make it more interesting. the mixing is fairly good on this too. really I don't have much else to critque except to keep building on this. It's a good song, but it could be better, greater, if you go a little further. Particularly with the melody.

at about 1:00 that breakdown is nice, but if it were me I'd make it a tad longer and bring in something new. from that point on the song doesn't seem to change much. it's like you repeated the first section.

2:00

nice ending. lol I love how when the track loops back around in the NG player it sounds like it's all seamlessly transitioned from the end to the beginning again :D

For the most part, this is good. 9/10 keep it up and keep me posted if you change anything

-TC-

Or4nges responds:

Thanks so much man! Yeah I realize it's kind of repetitive, but I thought maybe the shortness of the track would make up for that :P

When I improve it, i'll be sure to tell you :D

Thanks again.

great work

you've certainly come a long way from when you started on this flp. You know what I've had to say about it and I'm very impressed by the growth that took place here. I approve.

keep up the great work and get the damn thing finished (unlike me lol)

-TC-

that melody is great. love the piano....

I don't normally listen to hiphop, but this is a great production here. I can see you put a lot of effort into it.

the piano in this is outstanding. really love that chord progression. your voice is on beat, great lyrics too. and I agree, I'm tired of the music industry too lol.

too many great songs go unnoticed. this deserves more than the 184 listens you currently have.

keep up the great work dude. again, this isn't my genre but I can respect the effort put into it.

5/5 10/10

-TranceCrafter-

your kick

has improved soo dramatically its ridiculous.

great track.

Sirdangolot5 responds:

Thanks bro! :D

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