dude this is actually really good for the fact you were using some certain production techniques. didn't realize how hard it was to make this level of trance/electronic with some of those old methods. I didn't realize you've been doing this since 2006.

good use of variation man. would recommend a snare roll :)

dude the sound design on this is some of the best I've seen in a long time.

there is some stuff I am hearing in your latest productions that is similar to some things I've been trying to push in my own stuff as well man. very impressive. don't worry about if you have a low view count on this. keep sending me stuff, keep pushing those original ideas and the views will start to trickle in because your stuff is going to send vibes that no one else is going to be sending.

- John

this is awesome! :) so happy to know someone who puts so much passion into their work. I think you will become really really good even better than you are now in the next few years :) sing the way you want to..