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[[Fiji] Complexities]

Glad to see you made the top 5 :D

This shit is great, you've really come such a long way.

I know you've spent a lot of time on this and put in a lot of hard work so I would have demanded you make top 5....oh wait lol.

Regardless, I really like this track. Kinda creepy how all the recordings are about people dying lol.

keep it up, you still owe me that collab :P

-TC-

MrFijiWiji responds:

i do owe u one haha. well get on that soon :P and lolololol yes its about god and dying, haha.

[- Ambiguous]

Nice

This is me responding to your PM on youtube :P Already listened to your track in full, listening again as I write this...

This has a very unique sounding introduction, the melody is simple yet very solid. good work.

0:00 - 0:25

Best part of the song imo. You nailed this one pretty well. however I think it could use a bit more reverb, and possibly some more ambiance. The bells really give this song character, actually I think that the reason I like this part the best is because it reminds me of my own genre. nicely done.

0:25 when the drums hit came as a bit of a surprise you've got rhythm down pretty well, though the melody loses its focus. I think you ought to expand on it and build harmonies and melodic structure ;)

also, the percussion is pretty well done though I think it would be nice if you put some filters on it to make it more interesting. the mixing is fairly good on this too. really I don't have much else to critque except to keep building on this. It's a good song, but it could be better, greater, if you go a little further. Particularly with the melody.

at about 1:00 that breakdown is nice, but if it were me I'd make it a tad longer and bring in something new. from that point on the song doesn't seem to change much. it's like you repeated the first section.

2:00

nice ending. lol I love how when the track loops back around in the NG player it sounds like it's all seamlessly transitioned from the end to the beginning again :D

For the most part, this is good. 9/10 keep it up and keep me posted if you change anything

-TC-

Or4nges responds:

Thanks so much man! Yeah I realize it's kind of repetitive, but I thought maybe the shortness of the track would make up for that :P

When I improve it, i'll be sure to tell you :D

Thanks again.

[Smoulder [RNG]]

your kick

has improved soo dramatically its ridiculous.

great track.

Sirdangolot5 responds:

Thanks bro! :D

[Glancing Back - F-777]

Dude this is excellent. You should be proud.

I love this, the melody is outstandingly good.

production-wise, there are a few parts where it clips so you might want to go back and get those little blips out, but I have full confidence you'll do it :)

This is absolutely breathtaking nonetheless!

I think you should extend it, make a 6 min version ;) That would so totally be the shit.

F-777 responds:

That means a lot coming from you man =).
Ya im making a longer version already.

Thanks so much!!
(I will fix the parts it clips at)

[Sunfish (NG Edit) [RNG]]

great work

awesome track! no complaints

Sirdangolot5 responds:

Thanks man. From you that means a whole lot :D

[Sunfish (Extended Mix) [RNG]]

nice

the chord progression is very nice, love the laid back style you have going here.

build up was a bit boring in the beginning but quickly picks up nicely. for your first song containing pads, you pulled them off quite well.

percussion was a bit too simple for my taste, but I think that's something that comes with practice.

anyways, voted 5 and here's my score.

-TC-

Sirdangolot5 responds:

Bawwww

another nine D:<

Thanks anyways man! :D

[Sunday Clouds [RNG]]

nice improvements :)

I already reviewed this before I think, but this one seems more engaging than the last one. mixing is pretty damn solid. It seems like the song could use some more energy, or change. it does kinda go on for a while with the same overall feel....but I suppose that was the style you were going after.

after seeing the absolute crap that somehow managed to take up four spots on best of the week this week, I'll say that you deserve a 10. (I would rate 9, but in comparison with the rest of the shit topping all the good submissions, you deserve 100/10 imo)

-TC-

Sirdangolot5 responds:

ahaha, thanks man :D