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[[Fiji] Complexities]

Glad to see you made the top 5 :D

This shit is great, you've really come such a long way.

I know you've spent a lot of time on this and put in a lot of hard work so I would have demanded you make top 5....oh wait lol.

Regardless, I really like this track. Kinda creepy how all the recordings are about people dying lol.

keep it up, you still owe me that collab :P

-TC-

MrFijiWiji responds:

i do owe u one haha. well get on that soon :P and lolololol yes its about god and dying, haha.

[- Ambiguous]

Nice

This is me responding to your PM on youtube :P Already listened to your track in full, listening again as I write this...

This has a very unique sounding introduction, the melody is simple yet very solid. good work.

0:00 - 0:25

Best part of the song imo. You nailed this one pretty well. however I think it could use a bit more reverb, and possibly some more ambiance. The bells really give this song character, actually I think that the reason I like this part the best is because it reminds me of my own genre. nicely done.

0:25 when the drums hit came as a bit of a surprise you've got rhythm down pretty well, though the melody loses its focus. I think you ought to expand on it and build harmonies and melodic structure ;)

also, the percussion is pretty well done though I think it would be nice if you put some filters on it to make it more interesting. the mixing is fairly good on this too. really I don't have much else to critque except to keep building on this. It's a good song, but it could be better, greater, if you go a little further. Particularly with the melody.

at about 1:00 that breakdown is nice, but if it were me I'd make it a tad longer and bring in something new. from that point on the song doesn't seem to change much. it's like you repeated the first section.

2:00

nice ending. lol I love how when the track loops back around in the NG player it sounds like it's all seamlessly transitioned from the end to the beginning again :D

For the most part, this is good. 9/10 keep it up and keep me posted if you change anything

-TC-

Or4nges responds:

Thanks so much man! Yeah I realize it's kind of repetitive, but I thought maybe the shortness of the track would make up for that :P

When I improve it, i'll be sure to tell you :D

Thanks again.

[Smoulder [RNG]]

your kick

has improved soo dramatically its ridiculous.

great track.

Sirdangolot5 responds:

Thanks bro! :D

[Glancing Back - F-777]

Dude this is excellent. You should be proud.

I love this, the melody is outstandingly good.

production-wise, there are a few parts where it clips so you might want to go back and get those little blips out, but I have full confidence you'll do it :)

This is absolutely breathtaking nonetheless!

I think you should extend it, make a 6 min version ;) That would so totally be the shit.

F-777 responds:

That means a lot coming from you man =).
Ya im making a longer version already.

Thanks so much!!
(I will fix the parts it clips at)

[Sunfish (NG Edit) [RNG]]

great work

awesome track! no complaints

Sirdangolot5 responds:

Thanks man. From you that means a whole lot :D

[Sunfish (Extended Mix) [RNG]]

nice

the chord progression is very nice, love the laid back style you have going here.

build up was a bit boring in the beginning but quickly picks up nicely. for your first song containing pads, you pulled them off quite well.

percussion was a bit too simple for my taste, but I think that's something that comes with practice.

anyways, voted 5 and here's my score.

-TC-

Sirdangolot5 responds:

Bawwww

another nine D:<

Thanks anyways man! :D